Question

16．你的外教Mr．Beckham 想了解同學(xué)們中考后打算做些什么，他設(shè)計了一份調(diào)查問卷，以下是部分同學(xué)的假期計劃．請你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息介紹你們?nèi)�人在假期中的打算，關(guān)于你自己的計劃需補充完整，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)拓展．

Name	What to do	Where	Why
John	do something meaningful	neighborhood	help others
Mary	do housework	home	make parents less tired
I	…	…	…

注意：
（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
（2）語言通順、意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
（3）詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Beecham，
For the coming summer vacation，different students have different plans．All of them are interesting and meaningful．
John is going to do something for the neighborhood because he is really friendly．He likes helping others when they are in need．Mary will do housework at home so that her parents can feel less tired after work．I always pay attention to the environment．Therefore，I'm going to help to protect the environment by being a volunteer and giving out the leaflets around the city．Moreover，I plan to write a report about the air pollution in Nanjing．
In short，although we have different kinds of plans，we all want to try our best to do something important．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹Mary和John和我三人在假期中的打算．時態(tài)主要為一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．John；為鄰里做一些有意義的事情，幫助他人
2．Mary；在家做家庭作業(yè)，讓父母少累
3．我的打算和理由．
常用到的重點短語：
like doing sth 喜歡做某事
feel+adj  感覺怎樣
pay attention to 留意
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．He likes helping others when they are in need．
when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．in need 處于危急中
2．Mary will do housework at home so that her parents can feel less tired after work．
so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．
3．①In short，②although we have different kinds of plans，we all want to③try our best to do ④something important．
①in short 簡言之
②although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，不能與but 連用
③try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事

解答 Dear Mr．Beckham，
For the coming summer vacation，different students have differen t plans．All of them are interesting and meaningful．
John is going to do something for the neighborhood because he is really friendly．He likes helping others when they are in need．【高分句型】（John；為鄰里做一些有意義的事情，幫助他人）Mary will do housework at home so that her parents can feel less tired after work．【高分句型】（Mary；在家做家庭作業(yè)，讓父母少累）I always pay attention to the environment．Therefore，I'm going to help to protect the environment by being a volunteer and giving out the leaflets around the city．Moreover，I plan to write a report about the air pollution in Nanjing．（我打算做志愿者保護環(huán)境）
In short，although we have different kinds of plans，we all want to try our best to do something important．【高分句型】

點評 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時的英語學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．