Question

書面表達(計l0分)

每個人的一生中都有許多值得感謝的人，你最想感謝的人是誰呢? 是父母、老師、朋友，還是……? 請以Tom為名給他／她／他們寫一封信，說說你的心里話。

要求：

1．80個詞左右。

2．表達正確，行文流暢。

3. 至少寫出一個具體事例。

4．信件開頭、結尾已給出，不計人總詞數。

5．文中不能出現考生的真實姓名、地址、學校等相關信息。

Dear,

Best wishes !

Yours,

Tom

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear father,

I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you. Today I want to say, "I love you, dad !" In my heart, you are not only my father, but also my good friend.

 Since I was born, you have given me all your love and care. In order to create a better living condition and let me receive better education, you have to work hard every day. I always remember your coming home late and feeling tired.

 Except that, you are very strict with me. You often tell me to study hard, get along well with others, not to give up when facing difficulties. Once I got a C in the math exam, I felt sorry for it, I thought you would be angry, instead, you weren't angry with me, you helped me to find out why I failed, and encouraged me to be brave. Since then, I always smile at life whenever I have any trouble. Thank you very much for everything you’ve done for me.

【解析】這是一篇命題作文，所給材料非常簡略，故動筆前先要圍繞要點組織材料，確定寫作內容。寫作中注意將感謝的對象，原因等介紹清楚。在寫作時要注意時態，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規范性。本文時態問題比較復雜，注意時態與時間狀語的搭配問題，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。