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19．自從2014央視春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)播出后，小品《扶不扶》引起了國(guó)人的深深反思．幫還是不幫，成為了一個(gè)艱難的選擇．但我們知道，助人為樂(lè)，一直是我國(guó)中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德．雖然有時(shí)幫助他人會(huì)讓你很糾結(jié)，可是我們內(nèi)心對(duì)真善美的渴望不能變，我們樂(lè)于助人的優(yōu)良品德也需要堅(jiān)持并發(fā)揚(yáng)光大．作為中學(xué)生，當(dāng)他人有需要時(shí)，你一定愿意義無(wú)反顧地去幫助吧？請(qǐng)以"Helping others is great"為題，談?wù)勀愕南敕ㄅc做法．

Topic	Helping others is great
Why helping others is great？	1 每個(gè)人都會(huì)有困難，幫助他人等于幫助自己 2 更容易交到朋友 3 …
What do you usually do to help others？	1．… 2 … …

注意：1短文必須包括三部分內(nèi)容，需要陳述話題、意義（3條）和做法（至少2條）
2表中右欄信息僅供參考，也可自由發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右
Helping others is great!
Helping others is considered as one of the traditional Chinese virtues（美德）．Sometimes，it's kind of hard for us to make a decision whether to help or not，but we are supposed to help others．
Becausehelping others is helping ourselves．
I enjoy giving my hand to others for thefollowing reasons．Firstly，when you are in trouble，you need others'help aswell．So if you are always helpful to others，they will be willing to help you，too．Secondly，it's easier to make friends with those who are given help fromyou．Besides，helping others can make you feel happy and take pride in yourself．It's really a good feeling．
Helping others is great．Therefore，I usually try my best to help others．At school，I often help my classmates withtheir English．At home，I do some chores as often as possible to make my motherrelaxed．
It's the truth that helping others is helping ourselves．Helping others is great!Try it and you will feel better．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
when you are in trouble，you need others'help as well當(dāng)你有麻煩，你也需要他人的幫助．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句
【高分句型二】
So if you are always helpful to others，they will be willing to help you，too．所以如果你總是樂(lè)于助人，他們也會(huì)樂(lè)意幫助你，
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Helping others is great!
   Helping others is considered as one of the traditional Chinese virtues（美德）．Sometimes，it's kind of hard for us to make a decision whether to help or not，but we aresupposed to help others．Because helping others is helping ourselves．
   I enjoy giving my hand to others for thefollowing reasons．Firstly，when you are in trouble，you need others'help as well【高分句型一】．So if you are always helpful to others，they will be willing to help you，too．【高分句型二】Secondly，it's easier to make friends with those who are given help fromyou．Besides，helping others can make you feel happy and take pride in  yourself．It's really a good feeling．（幫助他人是好的）
   Helping others is great．Therefore，I usually try my best to help others．At school，I often help my classmates withtheir English．At home，I do some chores as often as possible to make my motherrelaxed．（我通常怎樣做）
  It's the truth that helping others is helping ourselves．Helping others is great!Try it and you will feel better．

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