Question

最近的一項(xiàng)研究調(diào)查表明，大約20%的學(xué)生有不吃早飯的習(xí)慣。請根據(jù)下列表格內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一篇短文。

原   因	1. 晚上學(xué)習(xí)太晚，想多睡一會(huì)兒而不吃早飯；
2. 家長太忙無法照顧，直接給錢讓孩子自己解決；
3. 一些男生把錢拿去玩游戲，一些女生想保持苗條不吃早飯。
后   果	1. 上課無精打采，成績下降；
2. 身體越來越差……
你的建議	？（至少寫出一條建議并說明原因）

     注意：詞數(shù)90詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

     A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. That’s ____________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

A survey shows that about 20％of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. That’s because they stay up too late to study and they want to sleep more instead of having breakfast. Also their parents are too busy to look after them and so they just give some money to their children to buy food themselves. But some boys use the money to play computer games and some girls just want to keep slim without having breakfast. As a result, some students have no energy in class. They have worse and worse grades and they are unhealthier and unhealthier. I think good breakfast can give us enough energy for the whole day’s study and sport. So we should have breakfast every day.

【解析】

 試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)氐赖挠⒄Z把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來。寫作中要包含調(diào)查結(jié)果中所列舉的學(xué)生不吃早飯的三個(gè)原因、由此造成的后果、并發(fā)表一下你自己的建議等幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行陳述。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文簡明、扼要地闡明了調(diào)查結(jié)果：包括原因、后果和建議等，并包含了表格中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含形容詞比較級(jí)和過度語的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如are too busy to look after them，have worse and worse grades and they are unhealthier and unhealthier.，As a result,學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。