Question

7．請分別介紹你和你的一位好朋友的個人情況，包括：出生日期、最喜歡的科目、做會的技能、作息時間安排和上學的方式等．（文中不要出現真實姓名，字數在60-80字之間）
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  He likes playing volleyball．他喜歡打排球，like doing sth．喜歡做某事．
 高分句型二
 He says it's interesting．他說它很有趣． 這是一個賓語從句，He says是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 I have a good friend．【開頭點明主題】His name is Li Lei．He is Chinese．He is 13 years old．His birthday is on May 18th．He likes playing volleyball【高分句型一，注意like doing sth．的使用】．He can play it very well．And he often plays games with his classmates．His favorite subject is art．He says it's interesting【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．He often gets up at six every day and goes to school by bike，【正文部分詳細介紹朋友】we are good friends and we often go to school together．【結尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等