Question

11．根據(jù)所給問題提示，以My Favorite Animal 為題，寫一篇60詞左右的作文．
1  What kind of animals do you like？
2  Where are they from？
3  What are the animals like？
4  What do you think of them？

My Favorite Animals
There are many animals in the world．They are very lovely．My favourite animals are cats and rabbits．I have a white cat．Its name is Mimi．It can catch mice．It likes eating fish．I have a little rabbit too，I call it Lele．It's pink．It has long ears and red eyes．It likes eating carrots．I often play with them after school．They are my birthday presents from my grandpa．They can bring happiness to me．I think animals are our friends．We should love them．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are many animals in the world．世界上有許多動物．這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二  
I think animals are our friends．我認(rèn)為動物是我們的朋友．這是一個賓語從句，I think 是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 My  Favorite  Animals
There are many animals in the world【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】．They are very lovely．My favourite animals are cats and rabbits【開頭點明主題】．I have a white cat．Its name is Mimi．It can catch mice．It likes eating fish．I have a little rabbit too，I call it Lele．It's pink．It has long ears and red eyes．It likes eating carrots．I often play with them after school．They are my birthday presents from my grandpa．They can bring happiness to me．【正文部分詳細介紹最喜愛的動物】I think animals are our friends【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．We should love them．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

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