Question

現(xiàn)在，越來越多的家庭使用汽車，這改善了我們的生活，但同時也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給社會和家庭帶來極大的危害。作為中學生，我們應該怎樣做呢?請寫一篇100字左右有關交通安全的短文。

內(nèi)容包括：1.遵守交通規(guī)則，如……（舉一至兩例）

2.別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。

3.勸父母不要酒后駕車，不能在駕駛的時候使用手機。

4.其它（不少于兩句）

要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所給的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮；

2.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相關信息。

參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 traffic jam 塞車

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, As middle school students,

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

As middle school students we must obey the rules. Traffic safety is everybody's business. For example, we must walk on walk side. When we cross zebra–crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We should tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business ，can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以怎樣保證交通安全為主題寫一篇作文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容。一是遵守交通規(guī)則，如……（舉一至兩例）；二是別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球；三是勸父母不要酒后駕車，不能在駕駛的時候使用手機。最后是其它（不少于兩句），屬于讓我們自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容。主要內(nèi)容雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者從四個方面，告訴大家怎樣保證交通安全，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。如Traffic safety is everybody's business. For example, we must walk on walk side. When we cross zebra–crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business ，can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.等。

考點：提綱類作文。