Question

根據下面提供的信息作自我介紹，我的名字是Kitty，我是一個12歲的女孩，我就讀于陽光學校，我愛幫助別人，我住在一個離市中心10英里的一棟公寓里。

要求：語句通順，表達正確，不少于5句話。可適當發揮。

First name	Mary
Last name	Green
Telephone number	654-2898

 

 

 

Answer 1

My name is Kitty. I am a girl. I am twelve . I study in Beijing Sunshine School. I am kind and helpful. I often help others. I am a volunteer. I often help my neighbors fix computers or mend their bikes . I sometimes help the old clean their rooms. I live with my family in a big flat. It is ten miles from the center of Beijing city.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹Kitty的性別年齡愛好學校等等。主語用第一人稱單數。

【亮點說明】這篇短文要點全，敘述條理，沒有語言錯誤。短文用了一些短語及句式，如：I often help my neighbors fix computers or mend their bikes；I live with my family in a big flat.及It is ten miles from the center of Beijing city.等。

考點：提綱作文。