Question

假如你是李華，你想推薦你班同學王平為本學期最佳學生獎得主，請根據下列要點寫

一封推薦信：

1．各門功課學得很好。歷史很突出，對中國歷史了解很多。

2．喜愛體育。足球踢得很好，是校足球隊的成員。

3．非常樂于助人。經常在車上給老人讓座；為希望工程籌款。有一天在回家的路上幫助一個迷路的兒童找到了媽媽。

要求：1．語法正確，意思連貫，書寫規范，要點齊全，適當拓展；

2．詞數不少于80詞。

Dear Sir/Madam，

I'd like to____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear sir,

I’d like to recommend Wang Ping for this year’s Best Student Award.

Wang Ping studies well. He is good at history and he knows a lot about Chinese history. Wang Ping likes sports, and he plays football well. He is a member of school football team. Wang Ping is really helpful. He often gives his seat to the old on the bus and collects things for Project Hope. Last week, on his way home he helped a lost child find his mother.

I think Wang Ping should get the award. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據表格內容可知本文要用一般現在時和第三人稱，寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如短語be good at，be helpful，give his seat to和句型I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。