Question

上周日天氣晴朗，我和我的朋友一起去了動物園。根據(jù)提示用一般過去時態(tài)描述這次游玩。

提示詞：（乘公交車，早上9:00出發(fā)，10:00到達(dá)，拍照，玩的高興，下午4:00返回）

 

Answer 1

Last Sunday it was sunny.I went to the zoo with my friends.We went there by bus.We started at nine in the morning.We arrived at the zoo at about 10.We saw a lovely elephant, some beautiful giraffes and the smart monkeys.We all liked monkeys because they were really interesting! We took some photos in the zoo.We came back at 4 in the afternoon. We had a good day.

【解析】

試題分析：本文只給出了作文的一些話題，需要學(xué)生先根據(jù)提示列出提綱，要注意上下文的銜接，根據(jù)要求這是敘述的是上周日的事情，所以應(yīng)該用一般過去式。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文用了一些短語和句式，使文章增色了不少，如：I went to the zoo with my friends. We all liked monkeys because they were really interesting!文中用了連詞如：because和and等，使句子的結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜化了。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。