Question

15．近20年來各方面調查表明青少年體質的下降令人擔憂．請你以How to keep healthy為題，寫一篇60-80詞的短文，說說你的看法和建議．
要求：主要包括以下內容，可以適當發揮．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
1．體質下降的原因；  如：eat too much junk food，have too much homework，…
2．合理的健康建議．如：some useful advice，should do more exercise，eat a balanced diet（飲食平衡），enough sleep…
How to keep healthy
Nowadays students physical fitness is declining（體質下降） year by year．I think there are some reasons．
（體質下降的原因）Students have too much homework to do，so they have little time to have sports．Some students eat too much junk food．That's also bad for their health．
Then，how to keep healthy？（合理建議）Here are some useful advice．First，students should do more exercise．Second，students should eat a balanced diet．They should eat more vegetables and fruits，and try to eat less junk food．Finally，enough sleep is also very important．．

Answer 1

分析 本是一篇話題作文．本文所給內容比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些所給的點表達出來．動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮．本文的要點由兩點：1．體質下降的原因2．合理的健康建議，根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態；由于是給別人提出建議，給出自己的觀點，所以人稱主要為第三人稱．注意說話的語氣及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系．重點短語句型：be bad for，First，Second，Finally，keep healthy等

解答 How to keep healthy
       Nowadays students'physical fitness is declining year by year．I think there are some reasons．（體質下降的原因）Students have too much homework to do，so they have little time to have sports．Some students eat too much junk food．That's also bad for their health．
       Then，how to keep healthy？（合理建議）Here are some useful advice．First，students should do more exercise．Second，students should eat a balanced diet．They should eat more vegetables and fruits，and try to eat less junk food．Finally，enough sleep is also very important．

點評 本篇為話題作文．在寫作中要注意層次緊湊，開始有總說，最后一段總結，中間分要點分別說明題中給出的要點．用first，second，third，at last顯得層次鮮明，邏輯性很強．因為文章是提出建議，所以我們要用許多委婉的表達來給別人提出建議，注意不要出現語法，詞匯等的錯誤，不要出現漢語式的英語．