Question

根據表格中的信息，寫一篇作文，比較你的兩個好朋友Bob和Mary。

要求：1. 50—70詞；2. 文中不要出現自己的真實信息。

	Bob	Mary
Differences	taller	tall
outgoing	more outgoing
play soccer	go skating
The same	short curly hair
friendly and kind
enjoy singing

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have two good friends.They are Bob and Mary.In some ways,they are the same;in some ways they are different.They both have short curly hair.They are both friendly and kind.

And they both enjoy singing.However,there are some differences between them.Bob is taller than Mary.Mary is more outgoing than Bob.Bob likes playing soccer after school.But Mary likes going skating in her free time..

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖表作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一、三人稱，注意時態與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：in some ways在某些方面，enjoy singing.喜歡唱歌，more outgoing than Bob比鮑勃更外向，likes going skating喜歡滑冰，in her free time在她空閑時間里等,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點：圖表作文。