Question

8．Describe your favorite teacher in no more than 120words according to the following points．His or her looks （hair\height\build）   
His or her likes or dislikes   
His or her personal character   
His or her way of teaching （at least one example）
（點題）My favorite teacher is Zhang Shishun．（外貌）He has short hair．He's of medium build．（喜好）He likes reading all kinds of books，writing notes and keeping doing exercises every day．He dislikes smoking，drinking wine and talking idly．（性格）He's outgoing and energetic．He can make a speech for four hours．
（教學方法）He's very patient and is never angry with his students．He has a positive way of looking at his students who have difficulites in learning．He said，"I'm happy to have such students．It's these students that give me chance to show my ability to educate them．"I'm not good at learning at the beginning．By and by，I make great progress because he keeps encouraging me and never say something bad to me．．

Answer 1

分析 此題是介紹人物的命題作文．1．審題立意：記敘文、描寫人物、用第三人稱、一般現在時．2、構思列綱：點名主題"最喜歡的老師"；根據題意內容對英語老師進行進一步的描寫；這是一篇給材料作文，本文所給要點是幾個問題，1．His or her looks （hair\height\build）.2．His or her likes or dislikes 3．His or her personal character 4．His or her way of teaching 故動筆前先要閱讀要點，找出問題的答案．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將問題所涉及內容表達完整．語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系．重點詞匯和句型：favorite，be of medium…，like doing sth，be angry with，make progress等

解答 （點題）My favorite teacher is Zhang Shishun．（外貌）He has short hair．He's of medium build．（喜好）He likes reading all kinds of books，writing notes and keeping doing exercises every day．He dislikes smoking，drinking wine and talking idly．（性格）He's outgoing and energetic．He can make a speech for four hours．
（教學方法）He's very patient and is never angry with his students．He has a positive way of looking at his students who have difficulites in learning．He said，"I'm happy to have such students．It's these students that give me chance to show my ability to educate them．"I'm not good at learning at the beginning．By and by，I make great progress because he keeps encouraging me and never say something bad to me．

點評 本題是考查書面表達能力，在平時的學習中要加強寫的訓練，達到熟練運用的目的，書寫工整，語法準確，過渡自然連貫．