Question

20．在初中三年的學習生活中，父母、老師給了我們很多幫助．假設你是李明，在即將畢業之際，用英語寫一段文字以表達感激之情．感謝的對象在父母、老師中任選其一．內容必須包括以下提示點：1、感謝的對象及原因；2、舉例說明幫助你的事由、經過和結果；3、你的感受和打算．
注意1、文中不得出現真實的人名、校名及地名；=2、詞數在80-100之間，已給出的文字不計入總詞數．

DearMum/Dad/Mum and Dad，
Words can’t show my thanks to you，Words can’t show my thanks to you．（感謝原因）You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．（舉例說明）Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I’ve become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．（感受和打算）I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future．


Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇提綱作文，寫作內容是在初中三年的學習生活中，父母、老師給了我們很多幫助．假設你是李明，在即將畢業之際，用英語寫一段文字以表達感激之情．要求是感謝的對象在父母、老師中任選其一，根據這個內容可知這里敘述的過去的事情，所以句子應該用一般過去時．后面的感受及打算部分句子應該用一般將來時．用第一人稱和第二人稱，要注意句子上文之間的銜接．重點短語及句型：take good care of，in trouble，used to，gave me a lot of advice．With your help，I’m so thankful to you 等等

解答 Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad，（感謝的對象）
   Words can’t show my thanks to you．（感謝原因）You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．（舉例說明）Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I’ve become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．（感受和打算）I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future．
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming

點評 本題是一篇提綱提作文，寫給自己的父母或老師的感謝信，學生比較有話說，但是要注意提示要點一定寫全．同時還要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規則的正確性．寫作時，要注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達流暢．