Question

同學們，你們周末都怎么過的呢？你一定有過一個愉快的周末吧！請以A happy weekend為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的作文，詳細介紹你的上午、下午和晚上的活動。
                                                                                               
                                                                                               
                                                                                               
                                                                                               
                                                                                               
                                                                                               
                                                               

Answer 1

It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. our family had a picnic in a park. We brought many food there,such as: fruit, drink and bread. My parents talked with each other. They talked very happily. My sister read a magazine. I like flying a kite.so I flew a kite very well, We were very happy. We hope that we can play like this once more next week.

解析文章要求介紹你的上午、下午和晚上的活動。要注意時態的正確使用，如表示現在的季節，人的愛好時，都要用一般現在時，回憶白天發生的事要用一般過去式，另外主語遣詞造句。語法問題，拼寫規范。