Question

“保護環境，人人有責”， 請以How to Be a Greener Person為題，寫一篇有關環保的短文并適當發表自己的看法，90詞左右，包含以下要點:

1 積極參加各種活動，宣傳環保；

2 使用紙張的兩面，收集廢紙、軟飲料罐；

3 使用布袋購物，不用塑料袋；

4 節約水電，及時關燈、關水龍頭；

5 短途旅行盡量步行或騎車。

How to Be a Greener Person

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

How to be a greener person.

Now all the persons in the world are talking about being more environmentally friendly, which calls on us to be a greener person. Being a greener person means that we should try our best to pollute the environment less and be more friendly to the environment, which is easier said than done. To be a greener person, we should use bicycles or public transport services rather than driving your own cars or motorbikes. We should try to recyle what we use and try not to waste them. We can also be greener by saving water and electricity and so on.Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try your best and we will make a difference.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求寫一篇保護環境的短文。要求中已經給出了主要要點，因此要求我們自由發揮的地方不多，只是需要注意不能遺留要求中的要點。動筆前先要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復讀幾遍，適當修改。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的從句和短語，為文章增色不少. 如: talk about談論；call on號召；try one’s best to do sth盡力做某事；as well as也，和……一樣以及有which引導的定語從句等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點：考查提綱類作文。