Question

假設(shè)Jeff 是你的朋友 請你以“My friend，Jeff.”為題寫一篇關(guān)于Jeff的作文，作文的內(nèi)容必須包括下面的信息（15分）

1．美國人，1999年出生。

2. 對Jeff的外貌簡單的描述

3家住離學(xué)校很遠(yuǎn)的公寓大樓，

4. 校園生活（school life）

5. 暑假將到，Jeff 對暑假的計(jì)劃和安排

溫馨提示：①要點(diǎn)齊全，語言流暢，表達(dá)清楚；絕不能逐字逐句翻譯 ②書寫規(guī)范，字跡清楚；③詞數(shù)： 80詞左右

My friend, Jeff

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Jeff is my good friend. He was born in 1999 in American. He is tall with a round face and big blue eyes .He lives in an apartment building. It is far from his school. So every morning he gets up early and has a quick breakfast at seven o’clock. Then he goes to school by bus. .Classes at eight o’clock. There are four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. Jeff likes Chinese best. Because he thinks it is interesting. Jeff likes travelling . So this summer holiday he plans to go to Mount Fanjing with his parents because the weather there is cool in summer.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。