Question

1．安全對每個人都很重要．請根據以下信息內容提示，寫一篇關于校園安全的英語小短文．
提示：1．體育鍛煉
       2．上下樓梯
       3．交朋結友
       4．食品衛生
要求：1．語句通順，表達準確，內容連貫；
       2．短文可以適當發揮；但要包含以上要點．
       3．詞數：80-100詞．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
Safety has become the focus to us all．How to be safe at school is especially important to us students．（體育鍛煉中的安全）First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports．（上下樓梯的安全）Second，There are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．（交朋結友的安全）Third，we should be friendly and get on well with others，don't quarrel or even fight．（食品衛生中的安全）Last but not least，We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．
（總結概括）In a word，it's important to remember these for us all．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文．結合要點提示，可知本文主要從四個方面進行敘述，1．體育鍛煉2．上下樓梯3．交朋結友4．食品衛生．注意圍繞要點組織材料，適當發揮．根據材料內容確定主要句子的時態是一般現在時，第一人稱為主．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．
重點詞匯和短語：First，．Second．Third．Last but not least首先，第二，第三，最后但同樣重要的
get on well with 和…相處的好
keep away from遠離…
be harmful to對…有害
in a word總之
 等等

解答 Safety has become the focus to us all．How to be safe at school is especially important to us students． First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports．（體育鍛煉中的安全） Second，There are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．（上下樓梯的安全）Third，we should be friendly and get on well with others，don't quarrel or even fight． （交朋結友的安全） Last but not least，We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．（食品衛生中的安全） （高分句型）
In a word，it's important to remember these for us all． （總結概括） （高分句型）

點評 做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤．