Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇10句話（大約50-70個(gè)字左右）的自我介紹。

（1）我叫Frank, 今年14歲，是一名Guang Ming Middle School的學(xué)生；

（2）可參照以下句型：I can ….

I like ….

My favorite… is/are ….

My hobby is …/ My hobbies are ….

I go to school ….

 

Answer 1

Hi! I am Frank. I am 14 years old. I am a student of Guang Ming Middle School. I like sports. And I can play basketball and volleyball. My favorite subject is P.E. I like our P.E. teacher, because he often plays games with us. My hobbies are reading books and listening to music. Because they are relaxing and fun. I go to school by bike. I love our school.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，進(jìn)行自我介紹。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am ……， I like......及 because......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我的名字，接下來介紹我的愛好，最后我愛我的學(xué)校。此處用了play basketball，favorite subject，plays games with ， go to school 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。