Question

7．每個(gè)人都有自己心目中的英雄，那么誰(shuí)是你心目中的英雄呢？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇短文來(lái)描述一下他吧！
提示：
①When and where was he/she born？
②What is he/she famous for？
③Do you want to be a person like him/her？Why？
要求：
①短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
②80詞左右．
Yao Ming is my hero．He is famous for playing basketball and being a model of protecting wild animals．Yao was born in Shanghai in 1980．He was given his first basketball on his fourth birthday．And he began to play basketball at the age of nine．His parents and wife are all basketball players．
I think Yao Ming is a successful man、He has his own business and a happy family．I also like playing basketball，and I will try my best to become a famous sports star，too．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
And he began to play basketball at the age of nine他九歲的時(shí)候開(kāi)始打籃球．
at the age of…在幾歲的時(shí)候
【高分句型二】
I will try my best to become a famous sports star 我會(huì)盡力成為一個(gè)著名的運(yùn)動(dòng)明星．
try one's best to do sth盡力做某事

解答 Yao Ming is my hero．He is famous for playing basketball and being a model of protecting wild animals．（因什么而著名）Yao was born in Shanghai in 1980（出生時(shí)間地點(diǎn)）．He was given his first basketball on his fourth birthday．And he began to play basketball at the age of nine【高分句型一】．His parents and wife are all basketball players．
I think Yao Ming is a successful man．He has his own business and a happy family．I also like playing basketball，and I will try my best to become a famous sports star，too【高分句型二】．（希望成為他一樣的人及原因）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，句子要通順連貫，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．