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18．你一定去過很多地方旅游，你印象最深的是哪里呢？把你的開心分享給大家吧！請你寫篇80詞左右的旅游經歷吧．
以下內容僅供參考，也可自行安排內容．
時間：…
地點：南京、北京、海南…
人物：和誰一起去的
活動：游覽、拍照、劃船…
名勝：玄武湖、天安門、長城、天涯海角…
食物：北京烤鴨、水果…
交通工具：汽車、火車、飛機…

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一 
When we arrived there，we were very excited，just like the high temperrature there!當我們到那里時，我們都很興奮，就像那的高溫一樣．這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．
 高分句型二
On the last day，we went to Disney Land Ocean Park，a theme park which has something like Disneyland Park．最后一天，我們去了迪士尼樂園海洋公園，這個主題公園有點像迪斯尼樂園．which has something like Disneyland Park是定語從句，修飾先行詞  a theme park．

解答 Have you ever been to Hongkong？I really had a wonderful time in Hongkong last summer vacation．【開篇點明主題】
We went there by air．When we arrived there，we were very excited，just like the high temperrature there!【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】On the first day，we visited the Disneyland Park．I played the roller coaster，sky wheel and so on．What most unforgettable was that I took many photos with Mickey Mouse and Donal Duck．On the second day，we went shopping and bought a lot of things．I bought many shirts in different style．On the last day，we went to Disney Land Ocean Park，a theme park which has something like Disneyland Park．【高分句型二，注意定語從句的使用】【正文部分詳細介紹旅行經歷】
I really enjoyed myself in Hongkong．【結尾緊扣主題】

點評 動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．