Question

假設你是Peter,請根據以下信息，寫一篇題為My Family的書面表達，字數至少六句話。標題和結尾已給出。

My Family

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I have a happy family. I love my family.

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

My family

My name is Peter. I come from America. I am twelve years old.I’m a student. There are three people in my family:my father ,my mother and I. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We are happy every day. I have a happy family . I love my family.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，Peter介紹他的家庭。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I am......；There are......及We are.......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了自己的姓名和年齡，接下來介紹家庭成員的職業，最后指出愛自己的家人。此處用了come from， twelve years old，every day. 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。