Question

14．談一談你現在與兩年前有什么不同，并根據提示語寫一篇短文，要求字跡工整，詞數60字左右．
提示詞語：taller，more popular，more outgoing，be better at English，be a better student．I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last two years．
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games． However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．I‘m better at English than before．Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．I was more popular．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．I want to be a better students．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．過去，我太害羞了不敢在他人面前說話．
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能．
【高分句型二】
I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．我學習如此好以至于現在我是班上最好的．
so…that，如此…以至于，that引導的結果狀語從句．

解答 I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last two years．
      In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型一】（性格內向，不敢在人前講話）I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects（對學習不感興趣，成績不好）．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．（不愛運動，沉迷電腦游戲）（過去）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（樂于分享，與同學相處很好）I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型二】I‘m better at English than before（各科成績優異）Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．I was more popular（積極參加各類活動）Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．（現在）
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．I want to be a better students（暑假計劃）

點評 寫作要抓住要點．要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準確地道的作文．