Question

每個人都有理想和追求，都有自己的夢想。你的夢想有多高，你就可能飛多高。世界上第一位沒有雙手的飛行員Jessica Cox通過自己的不懈努力創(chuàng)造了一個個奇跡。請根據(jù)圖片提示，描述她的奮斗史，并就此簡單談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?br />要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名。
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。
3. 詞數(shù)80左右。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

As the saying goes, will will find a way. Jessica Cox is such a living example to prove it. She is a girl who touches the sky without arms.                                       
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                 

Answer 1

As the saying goes, will will find a way. Jessica Cox is such a living example to prove it. She is a girl who touches the sky without arms.
When she was born, her parents were surprised to find that she had no arms. In order to live like others, she works hard. For example, she began to learn dance at a very early age, and she took driving lessons. Now she knows how to use computers . Because of her hard work, she became the world’s first armless pilot. How amazing!
Thinking about her story, I think I should work much harder so that I can make my dream come true early.

解析試題分析：本文的寫作首先對她出生時的情況進(jìn)行描寫，說明她沒有手臂she had no arms.她開始在很小的時候就學(xué)習(xí)跳舞she began to learn dance at a very early age參加駕校的課程she took driving lessons.并對現(xiàn)在的情況進(jìn)行描寫，她能夠使用電腦，成為了世界第一個無臂飛行員。最后表達(dá)自己的感想，如表達(dá)聽到她的故事，我會更加努力的學(xué)習(xí)以至于能夠?qū)崿F(xiàn)我自己的夢想I think I should work much harder so that I can make my dream come true early.
考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作
點(diǎn)評：在對于諸如此類文章的寫作，學(xué)生要注意詳略得當(dāng)，做到有條理。學(xué)生在平時的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)多個好處的句型。如be good for,benefit,useful等單詞短語。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對于不會表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會替換，同時注意用平時在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采。