Question

書面表達（15分）

同學們在一起同學三年，即將畢業，你想對同學和老師說些什么話呢？請以 I want to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates.為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear teachers and classmates，

How time flies! Three years has passed since we came here. And today I'll say goodbye to you. I'll remember our friendship and the happy moments we had together. These three years' experience is colorful and unforgettable in my life.

First, I want to thank all the teachers, though we have had some arguments, you have given me much knowledge in study and being a man. In fact, I have improved a lot with your help. Thank you with sincere feelings.

Second, I'd like to give my best wishes to my classmates. The classmates that haven't passed the exam should not give up. I know some of you are very able. Maybe you are too nervous to finish the exams. But there will be more chances and you can't miss them with any excuse. You will succeed sooner or later.

In a word, I want to express my best wishes to my teachers and classmates.

Good luck and wish you happiness.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文是以初三即將畢業為情景，在離開學校、老師和同學們的時候，應該對他們說些什么。這是一篇開放式的作文，這里面的內容都需要我們自己來完成。通過分析可知，畢業的時候，是一個離別的時候，這個時候對老師說的應該是感謝和祝福，感謝老師的辛勤培育；對同學們說的是過去三年在一起的回憶，還有對未來生活的期盼。所以我們要用正確的英語將這些感情正確的表達出來，句式表達要符合英語規范，語言要準確。當然我們要使用好的句式或者連詞，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達流暢。根據內容的需要，這篇短文中應該用一般現在時態或一般過去時態，注意不同時態的變化。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的范文。在初三畢業，即將離開學校、老師和同學們的時候，作者說出了自己的心里話。首先作者用How time flies開頭，感慨時間飛逝，這個句子非常符合作文給出的情景。第一段作者主要是點題，要向老師和同學們告別了，These three years' experience is colorful and unforgettable in my life.這里的句子概括性比較強。第二段作者主要寫了對老師們說的話，though we have had some arguments, you have given me much knowledge in study and being a man.，對老師表達的是感謝之情。接下來是對同學們說的話，有對落后同學的鼓勵，You will succeed sooner or later。最后作者重申了主題，In a word, I want to express my best wishes to my teachers and classmates. Good luck and wish you happiness.再次向老師和同學告別，并表達了自己的美好祝愿。

考點：開放式作文。