Question

11．你的好朋友 Sally 是一名來自美國的中學生．在交流中，你了解到中美兩國的課堂差別很
大．請你根據表格中的信息，描述各自的特點，并簡單地談談你的觀點．
In a Chinese class                                        In an American class
1．not call their teachers by their names      1．sit around the desks，face to face
2．listen to the teachers                              2．have quite relaxed rules
3．take notes                                             3．drink coffee or juice
4．put up their hands before speaking         4．speak out in class freely
5．be very serious                                     5．be very humorous
注意短文應包括表格中的信息和你自己的觀點．
2．詞數：不少于 70 詞．文章中第一段和最后一給出的開頭，不計入總詞數．
Differences between a Chinese class and American class
There are differences between a Chinese class and an American class．Let's have a look at them．In China，students cannot call their teachers by their names，they listen to teachers and take notes But in American，students is allowed to call teachers'name，what is more，students and teachers sit around the desks face to face，they can drink coffee or juice and they are quite relaxed．Chinese class is very serious，if a student wants to speak，he should put up his hand while American class is very humours，students can speak out in class freely．
Different countries have different cultures．In my opinion，Americaeducation respect children's choice and they are open．InChina，Ru jia culture is traditional one，and Chinese respect teachers and pay attention to education．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
But in American，students ①are allowed to call teachers'name，②what is more，students and teachers sit around the desks③face to face，they can drink coffee or juice and they are quite relaxed．但在美國，學生可以叫老師的名字，學生和老師們面對面地坐在桌子旁邊，他們可以喝飲料或果汁，很放松．
①be allowed to do sth被允許去做某事．
②what is more再者
③face to face面對面
【高分句型二】
Chinese class is very serious，①if a student wants to speak，he should put up his hand ②while American class is very humours，students can speak out in class freely．中國課堂很嚴肅，如果學生要發言，需要舉手．在美國，課堂很幽默，學生可以自由發言．
①if引導的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態動詞should，從句用一般現在時．
②while然而，表轉折．

解答 Differences between a Chinese class and American class
There are differences between a Chinese class and an American class．Let's have a look at them．In China，students cannot call their teachers by their names，they listen to teachers and take notes． But in American，students are  allowed to call teachers'name，what is more，students and teachers sit around the desks face to face，they can drink coffee or juice and they are quite relaxed．【高分句型一】Chinese class is very serious，if a student wants to speak，he should put up his hand while American class is very humours，students can speak out in class freely．【高分句型二】（中美兩國的課堂差別）
Different countries have different cultures．In my opinion，America education respect children's choice and they are open．In China，Ru jia culture is traditional one，and Chinese respect teachers and pay attention to education．（我的觀點）

點評 適當發揮但不能脫離中心，還要符合字數要求，切忌多多益善．古人云"言多易失"，你寫得越多，出錯的幾率就越大，所以不可畫蛇添足，為了語言的連貫性，適當使用過渡詞，如and、then、so、or、but等，可使文章錦上添花．