Question

8．生活中有許多一瞬間的美好，它們也許會給你留下永遠的回憶，你身邊的每個人對你來說都具有特殊的意義．請以"My special_______"為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你家庭的某個成員或你的朋友、老師、同學等，以及你們共同經歷的某個美好回憶．
要求：條理清晰，語言流暢，用詞準確，字跡工整，80詞左右．
My special friend
I have a special friend．Her English name is Amy．And I want to thank her for what she has done for me．
When I was in Grade 7，we studied in the same class．At first，I was not good at English．Because of that，I was very sad．Amy did well in English at that time．So she often helped me with my English in our spare time．With her help，my English improved so much that I kept up with my class finally．I wasso glad that I could not only speak English to my classmates and teacher fluently but also understand everything they said!
This is my special friend，Amy，someone who would not only have fun with me but also help me when I need it．I am glad to have this special friend．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型】
1．I was ①so glad that I could ②not only speak English to my classmates and teacher fluently but also understand everything ③they said!我是如此的開心，我不僅僅能流利的和同學說英語也能理解他們所說的．
①so…that表示如此…以致于，引導結果狀語從句．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個對等成分．
③they said定語從句，關系詞that作為從句賓語故省略，修飾先行詞everything．

2．This is my special friend，①Amy，someone ②who would ③not only have fun with me but also help me ④when I need it．這是我的特別的朋友，不僅僅和我玩的開心在我需要的時候還幫助我
①Amy，作為my special friend同位語．
②定語從句，先行詞someone不定代詞，故用who作為關系詞作主語．
③not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個對等成分．
④when引導的時間狀語從句．

解答 My special friend
I have a special friend．Her English name is Amy．（她是誰）And I want to thank her for what she has done for me．
When I was in Grade 7，we studied in the same class．At first，I was not good at English．Because of that，I was very sad．（我怎么了）Amy did well in English at that time．So she often helped me with my English in our spare time．With her help，my English improved so much that I kept up with my class finally．I was so glad that I could not only speak English to my classmates and teacher fluently but also understand everything they said!【高分句型】
This is my special friend，Amy，someone who would not only have fun with me but also help me when I need it．【高分句型】（為什么特別）I am glad to have this special friend．

點評 初中英語的作文，著重考察學生連詞成句的能力，要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面．在對所出現的問題或是采取的措施描寫中注意使用連詞或是好的句式．對于中學作文的寫作，盡量將所學的知識運用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結構緊湊的文章，不要出現中式英文．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文．