Question

11．三年快樂而充實的初中生活結束了，你將進入高中（中職）學校學習．展望未來，你對高中（中職）生活充滿期待．請以"I Expect My School Life"為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文．文章的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數．
要求：（1）內容要點：①生活、學習環境（餐廳，圖書館，運動場…）；②師生、同學關系；
③生活多彩、學業進步；④補充一點自己的想法．
（2）文章不得出現真實的姓名和學校名稱；要點齊全，語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規范，可以適當發揮．
（3）提示詞：get along with；colorful（adj．）；knowledge；habit
I Expect My School Life
I will study in a high school soon．Everything is new to me．（生活、學習環境）I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room．And the library is full of different kinds of books．So I can read them in my spare time．（師生、同學關系）I can get along well with my teachers and classmates．I can help each other with my classmates．（生活多彩、學業進步）At the same time，I expect my school life is colorful，after class I can listen to music，play chess and basketball．To get more useful knowledge or information，I can surf the Internet．（自己的想法）I will keep a good eating habit．Do exercise often to stay in good spirits．Try my best to make great progress．
As long as I stick to it，I can achieve my dream．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，要求是寫出對高中生活的期望，以I Expect My School Life為題寫一篇英語短文，寫作內容主要是：①生活、學習環境（餐廳，圖書館，運動場…）；②師生、同學關系；③生活多彩、學業進步；④補充一點自己的想法．根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態和將來時態，注意時態和主謂一致等問題．寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系．重點詞匯和短語有：be full of，get along well with，Try my best to等．

解答 I Expect My School Life
I will study in a high school soon．Everything is new to me
（生活、學習環境）I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room．And the library is full of different kinds of books．So I can read them in my spare time．（師生、同學關系）I can get along well with my teachers and classmates．I can help each other with my classmates．（生活多彩、學業進步）At the same time，I expect my school life is colorful，after class I can listen to music，play chess and basketball．To get more useful knowledge or information，I can surf the Internet．（自己的想法）I will keep a good eating habit．Do exercise often to stay in good spirits．Try my best to make great progress．
As long as I stick to it，I can achieve my dream．

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全．動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態，關鍵單詞等問題．寫作中注意將以前的自己和現在的自己介紹清楚，并介紹一下自己的愿望．