Question

17．假如你們學校正在舉辦電影周，同學們昨天觀看了一部動畫片《極速蝸牛》（Turbo），寫一篇80詞左右的英語觀后感，內容提示如下：
1．影片由好萊塢（Hollywood）出品，講述了一只叫Turbo的蝸牛的故事．
2．他擁有一個夢想--成為世界上跑得最快的蝸牛（snail），為此他每天努力練習；
3．他的朋友們都嘲笑他，但是他對他們的話不在意，最終獲得成功．
4．我們每個人都有著自己的夢想…
注意：1觀后感須包括所給內容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫
2．第4要點的內容須用2-3句話展開想象，做適當發揮
3．詞數80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
We watched a cartoon called Turbo yesterday．It is produced by Hollywood．The film tells a story of a snail called Turbo．He has a dream．He wants to be the fastest snail in the world．To realize his dream，he practises hard every day．All his friends laugh at him，but he doesn't care about their words．At last，he becomes successful．Each of us has a dream． Some dreams are big and others are small．Anyway，we should take action to make it come true．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To realize his dream，he practices running every day．
句中不定式短語"To realize his dream"作目的狀語，"practice doing sth"意為"練習做某事"．這句話意為：為了實現他的夢想，他每天練習跑步．
高分句型二：
Anyway，we should take action to make it come true．
句中"anyway"意為"無論如何"；"take action to　do　sth"意為"采取行動做某事"；"come　true"意為"實現"．這句話意為：無論如何，我們應該采取行動來讓它實現．

解答 We watched a cartoon called Turbo yesterday．It is produced by Hollywood．The film tells a story of a snail called Turbo．（介紹影片）He has a dream．He wants to be the fastest snail in the world．To realize his dream，he practices running every day．【高分句型一】All his friends laugh at him，but he doesn't care about their words．At last，he becomes successful．（蝸牛的故事）Each of us has a dream． Some dreams are big and others are small．Anyway，we should take action to make it come true．【高分句型二】（我的觀點）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．