Question

2014年世界青奧會將在中國南京舉行，青奧會志愿者招募活動正在進行中。假如你是Li Ming,作為一名中學生，你想推薦自己當青奧會志愿者. 請你寫一封推薦信給青奧會組委會。內容如下：

個人介紹	熱心有禮，助人為樂，善于交友，擅長英語。（就其中一項舉一例說明）
申報條件	目前是校英語俱樂部的主席；去年作為交換留學生（exchange student）在英國學習；……(至少一點)
申報目的	努力幫助來自世界各地的朋友了解南京；……(至少一點)

　要求：
　　1.詞數100個左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
　　2.所寫短文必須包括以上要點，適當發揮并加入過渡詞句使短文通順流暢。
　　3.文中不得出現真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。
評分標準：
語言規范，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫，書寫工整。
Dear Sir:
I want to be a volunteer of the Youth Olympic Games . I am happy that the Youth Olympic Games will be held in Nanjing .I want to be a volunteer very much.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours Sincerely:
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Sir:
I want to be a volunteer of the Youth Olympic Games . I am happy that the Youth Olympic Games will be held in Nanjing .I want to be a volunteer very much.
I am a warm-hearted and polite boy/girl. I like to help others. On the bus, I usually give my seat to the people in need. I like making friends . I am good at English and I can speak English very well.
Now, I am the chairperson of the English Club in our school. Last year, I studied as an exchange student in England. I have been a host of English Evening for many times in our school. My teachers and schoolmates think I am a good host.
If I am chosen a volunteer, I will try to help the friends from all over the world learn more about Nanjing. And I will try to make our city Nanjing be more famous in the world.
I hope I can be a good volunteer if I am chosen. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely:
Li Ming

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