Question

某英文報舉辦“家鄉的變化”主題征文活動。請根據下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。

過去	生活貧困，房屋破舊。 污染嚴重，垃圾遍地。
現在	生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人有自己的汽車； 環境變得更漂亮了。 旅游：每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客。
將來	希望……（兩點）

The Changes in My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small,

 

Answer 1

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old. Pollution was very serious. There was rubbish everywhere.

Now, great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. People live a better life. Their houses are large ad bright. Many people have owned cars. Every year, thousands of tourists from all over the world come to visit our city.

I hope we can how wider roads and more sports courts .I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構思好文章的結構，可按照時間順序來寫，注意要點的齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

【亮點分析】

這篇作文結構清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有許多實用的表達方式Now, great changes have taken place in my hometown.現在，家鄉發生了巨大的改變。Take place發生； more and more beautiful越來越漂亮； thousands of成千上萬； all over the world世界各地；better and better越來越好；in the future 在將來；等等。

考點：提綱類作文。