Question

13．Write at least 60words about the topic"My opinion on copying others'homework"（以"我對抄襲他們人作業的看法"為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格．）
注意：
1．短文必須包含下列三大點；
2．第一至第三要點必須包含1--2個列表中所給詞語，但第三點要適當發揮；
3．短文標題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．

1）The main reason （主要原因）	a large amount of homework，difficult to work out，lazy
2）The harms （危害）	a bad habit，be against the rules of the school
3）Your views （你的看法）	be honest，work hard

（注意：短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分．）
My opinion on copying other's homework
It is known to us all that some students copy other's homeworkThere are several reasons for thisphenomenon．The main reason is that a large amount of homework which isdifficult to work out needs to be done every day．Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish theendless exercises，in fact，it really does harm to us students in terms ofgetting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions．As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should not only be honest but work hardto finish all the homework on our own as well．As a saying goes"practicemakes perfect"．If we keep practicing and reviewing our lessonsthrough doing homework，we can do a good job in our exams．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是以"My opinion on copying others'homework"為題說說抄襲作業的原因和危害．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．原因；作業多，難，懶惰
2．危害；壞習慣，違反校規
3．我的打算；誠實，努力學習
常用到的重點短語：
be going to  打算…
and so on 等等
of course 當然
take photos照相
【高分句型】
1．The main reason is①that a large amount of homework ②which is difficult to work out needs to be done every day．主要的原因是，大量的家庭作業，這是很難解決的需要每天都做．
①that引導表語從句； a large amount of 大量的，后跟不可數名詞
②which引導的定語從句，修飾先行詞homework，在從句中作邏輯主語．
2．①If we②keep practicing and reviewing our lessons through doing homework，we can do a good job in our exams．如果我們通過做作業繼續練習和復習功課，我們可以在我們的考試中做得很好．
①if引導的條件狀語從句，從句時態用一般現在時表將來．
②keep doing sth繼續做某事

解答 My opinion on copying others'homework
    It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．There are several reasons for this phenomenon．The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done every day．【高分句型一】【抄作業的原因】Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises，in fact，it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions．【抄作業的危害】As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should not only be honest but work hardto finish all the homework on our own as well．As a saying goes"practicemakes perfect"．If we keep practicing and reviewing our lessons through doing homework，we can do a good job in our exams．【高分句型二】【我的打算】

點評 這是一篇提綱作文，文章的題目已經給出，而且列出了三條細節．寫作文時要仔細審題，每一條都要寫到．要注意前后句的連接，不要遺漏要點，并適當發揮．根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系．