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10．我國(guó)中小學(xué)生早餐營(yíng)養(yǎng)質(zhì)量嚴(yán)重不足．為了培養(yǎng)同學(xué)們健康的飲食習(xí)慣，你班擬在5月20日--"中國(guó)學(xué)生營(yíng)養(yǎng)日"召開(kāi)班會(huì)，談?wù)勚袊?guó)學(xué)生早餐營(yíng)養(yǎng)質(zhì)量不足的原因、后果及建議．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中提供的信息寫一篇80個(gè)詞左右的英文演講稿．
注意：1、文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2、不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名．
3、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Reason	•have no time to prepare the breakfast •keep slim（苗條的） •…
Result	•feel tired and sleepy in class •fail in the exams •…
Your advice	•…

Good morning，everyone!
A recent survey shows that most of the school students eat an unhealthy breakfast．Why don't they have breakfast？Some studentswho get up too late choose to miss breakfast，for they have no time to eat breakfast．Others go to school without breakfast，because their parents are too busy to prepare the breakfast for them．Some girls eat nothing in the morning in order to keep slim．And some boys likes eating the food from the stands on their way to school．In their opinion，it's more convenient．
As a result，most of them are not in good health．They feel tired and sleepy in class，so they can't do well in their studies．Some even fail in the exams．
　In fact，having no breakfast is bad for our health．So what should we do？It's important for us to have enough sleep and get up early so that we can have time to enjoy a wonderful breakfast．What's more，we can have some fruit and milk at school if possible．
Hope you have a healthy lifestyle．Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勚袊?guó)學(xué)生早餐營(yíng)養(yǎng)質(zhì)量不足的原因、后果及建議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．原因；沒(méi)時(shí)間準(zhǔn)備，保持苗條
2．結(jié)果；課堂上疲倦，困倦，考試不及格
3．我的建議
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
too…to do sth 太…而不能做某事
prepare for準(zhǔn)備
in order to 為了
as a result 結(jié)果
be bad for 對(duì)…不利
what's worse 更糟糕的是
【高分句型】
1．Some students①who get up too late choose to miss breakfast，②for they ③have no time to eat breakfast．
①who作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞students，who 作為從句的主語(yǔ)．
②for表示因?yàn)�，引�?dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
③have no time to do sth 沒(méi)時(shí)間做某事

2．Some girls eat nothing in the morning in order to keep slim．
in order to 為了，做目的狀語(yǔ)，keep silm 保持苗條．
3．①It's important for us to have enough sleep and get up early②so that we can have time to enjoy a wonderful breakfast．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
A recent survey shows that most of the school students eat an unhealthy breakfast．Why don't they have breakfast？Some students who get up too late choose to miss breakfast，for they have no time to eat breakfast．【高分句型】Others go to school without breakfast，because their parents are too busy to prepare the breakfast for them．Some girls eat nothing in the morning in order to keep slim．【高分句型】And some boys likes eating the food from the stands on their way to school．In their opinion，it's more convenient．（原因）
As a result，most of them are not in good health．They feel tired and sleepy in class，so they can't do well in their studies．Some even fail in the exams．（結(jié)果）
　In fact，having no breakfast is bad for our health．So what should we do？It's important for us to have enough sleep and get up early so that we can have time to enjoy a wonderful breakfast．【高分句型】What's more，we can have some fruit and milk at school if possible．（我的建議）
Hope you have a healthy lifestyle．Thank you for listening!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在對(duì)于諸如此類文章的寫作，學(xué)生要注意詳略得當(dāng)，做到有條理．學(xué)生在平時(shí)的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)多個(gè)好處的句型．．英語(yǔ)的寫作過(guò)程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換，同時(shí)注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來(lái)自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采．