Question

暑期就要到了，請你以Jill的名義給英國筆友Linda 發(fā)一封電子郵件談?wù)勀愕氖罴侔才拧?br />要求：1、自主發(fā)揮，語言通順。
2、80詞以上。郵件的開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Linda,
I’m very happy that the summer holidays are coming soon._______________________
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Jill

Answer 1

One possible version:
I’m very happy that the summer holidays are coming soon. I stall have enough time to do many things of my own. First, I am going to spend a week in the countryside with my grandparents. I really miss them . Then I’ll travel to Guilin with my parents. I’m sure we’ll have a great time! After that , I’ll come back and finish my holiday homework. I’ll also going to take some extra lessons to improve my studies. Besides, I’ll take enough exercise every day to keep healthy. How about your vacation plan?
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Jill

這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件。給出的材料比較簡略，我們所要做的首先是圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。