Question

6．請根據下面提示，以"My classmate"，寫一篇作文．
1．我的同學名字叫Mary．她比我外向，我比她聰明．她跑的比我快．我們兩個都喜歡體育，而且學習很好．
2．她最喜歡的電視節目是新聞，而我無法忍受．
3．Mary喜歡看電影，Sun Cinema 是最好的電影院，它有最舒適的座位．
4．Mary一月看三次電影，她幾乎不看電視．
5．昨天，我們做了些有趣的事情，我們去了青島，一切都很好．晚飯我們吃了特別的東西----海鮮（see food）
6．我希望一天能當能當一名記者．
Myclassmate
My classmate's name is Mary．She is more outgoing than me．I'm smarter than her．She runs faster than I．Bothers two of us like sports and study very well．Her favorite TV program is news，and I can't stand it．Mary likes to watch movies．Sun Cinema is the best movie theater．It has the most comfortable seats．Mary watches movies three times a month．She hardly ever watches TV．Yesterday，we did some interesting things．We went to Qingdao．Everything was great．We had something special for dinner--see food．I hope I can be a reporter one day．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 Her favorite TV program is news，but I can't stand it．   她最喜歡的電視節目是新聞，但我受不了． favorite 最喜愛的．
高分句型二
I hope I can be a reporter one day 我希望有一天我能成為一名記者．這是一個賓語從句，I hope是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 My classmate
My classmate's name is Mary．She is more outgoing than me．I'm smarter than her．She runs faster than I．Both of us like sports and study very well【要點一，我的同學名字叫Mary．她比我外向，我比她聰明．她跑的比我快．我們兩個都喜歡體育，而且學習很好】．Her favorite TV program is news，but I can't stand it【高分句型一，注意favorite的使用】．【要點二，她最喜歡的電視節目是新聞，而我無法忍受】Mary likes to watch movies．Sun Cinema is the best movie theater．It has the most comfortable seats．【要點三，Mary喜歡看電影，Sun Cinema 是最好的電影院，它有最舒適的座位】Mary watches movies three times a month．She hardly ever watches TV【要點四，Mary一月看三次電影，她幾乎不看電視】．Yesterday，we did some interesting things．We went to Qingdao．Everything was great．We had something special for dinner--see food【要點五，昨天，我們做了些有趣的事情】．I hope I can be a reporter one day．【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】【要點六，我希望一天能當能當一名記者】

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