Question

根據中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語僅供選用，請不要寫出你的真實校名和姓名。

學校要舉行“My dream job in the future”主題演講比賽，要求大家以此為題，寫一篇演講稿。內容包括：你的夢想職業，你的理由和所做的努力。

hobby, favourite, free time, work hard, try to do, come true

My dream job in the future

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

My dream job in the future

My dream job is to be a writer. Reading is one of my hobbies. Whenever I am free, you can find me bury myself in the story books I am interested in. Those books help me know a lot about the world, such as history, geography, science, society and so on. I wish I could be a writer and write many good books for the people.

Now I’ve read quite a few books in Oxford Bookworm series, and written several stories. Some of my teachers and friends say they are wonderful. I wish my dream would come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以My dream in the future 為題寫一篇演講稿，內容要包括你夢想的職業是什么、你選擇這一職業的理由以及你為實現夢想所做的努力三個方面。寫作時要注意這三個方面，不要遺漏要點。題目中給了我們一些我們可能用到的關鍵詞，像hobby, favourite, free time, work hard, try to do, come true等。寫作時要注意意思連貫、完整，并且要有邏輯性。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應主要使用一般現在時，第一人稱。

【亮點說明】這篇范文寫得是比較優秀的，在文章的開頭作者就先點明了主題，自己夢想的工作是當一名作家，開門見山，很直接。接下來敘述了自己選擇這樣職業的理由，并且理由很充分。第二段主要寫了自己為了實現夢想所做的努力，并在最后表達了夢想會實現的決心。內容完整，意思連貫。文中還用到了一些較好的句型，如Whenever I am free, you can find me bury myself in the story books I am interested in、Those books help me know a lot about the world, such as history, geography, science, society and so on、  Now I’ve read quite a few books in Oxford Bookworm series, and written several stories等。

考點： 開放類作文。