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3．近期，我國一名中學生隨父母旅游時，在埃及一著名景點文物上刻寫"××到此一游"，此事經媒體曝光后，在國內引起極大反響．作為一名中學生，你就"如何文明旅游"這一話題，談談自己的看法．
提示：1、旅游中不文明的陋習，如…；
2、文明意識和行為，如…；
3、詞數80左右（首句已給出，不計算在總詞數之內）．
Nowadays，traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life．But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest．Some make noises in public places．Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on．As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behaviors．For example，throw rubbish into dustbins and don't write or draw on the relics．Don't make noises in public places．We'd better follow guides and obey orders．At the same time，we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions．．

Answer 1

分析 本題是提綱作文，對一起熱點網絡事件中的不文明行為就"如何文明旅游"這一話題發表看法．故寫作要點：1列舉不文明行為．2．我的看法和文明行為，同時注意自己是中國人，要自覺的維護自己國家的形象．結合材料可知這篇短文使用的人稱主要是第一人稱，時態為一般現在時態，動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．
重點短語和句型：make noises 制造噪音
throw rubbish 扔垃圾
pay attention to 注意
had better do sth最后做某事
at the same time 同時
not only…but also不僅…而且…
At the same time，we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions．同時，我們不僅應該保護自然環境而且要尊重當地的傳統習俗．

解答 答案：Nowadays，traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life．But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest．Some make noises in public places．Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on．（不文明行為）As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behaviors．For example，throw rubbish into dustbins and don't write or draw on the relics．Don't make noises in public places．We'd better follow guides and obey orders（高分句型）．At the same time，we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions（我的看法以及一些文明行為）（高分句型）．

點評 此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題．寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤．只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數．另外可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應考時就會有的放矢．