Question

假如你叫李華，是陽光鎮的一名中學生。你想在學校創建一個英語角，為此，你在班級學生中展開調查，調查結果如下。請根據表格中的內容，用英語寫一篇短文，描述同學們的看法和理由，并發表自己的觀點。

???????? 觀點	?????????????????? 理由
65%的同學贊成	提高英語口語水平 獲得知識，開闊視野 學會與人交流
35%的同學反對	1. 作業多，沒時間 2. 英語不好，不敢開口
你的觀點	….

要求：1）短文應包括所給所有信息， 并適當發揮。

????? 2）語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。

????? 3）詞數：100詞左右。開頭已給，不計入總詞數。

?? We plan to set up an English Corner in our school. To know about what the students think about it, we’ve made a survey about it in our class. Here are the results.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We plan to set up English Corner in out school. To know about what the students think about it , we’ve made a survey about it in our class . Here are the results.

?? 65% of the students think it’s a good idea to set an English Corner. Firstly ,they can improve their spoken English by joining it . Secondly, students can not only get knowledge but also open their minds. Thirdly , students will learn how to communicate with others.

However, 35%of the students don’t think so. Some of them are so busy with their homework that they have no time for it . Others are not good at English, as a result , they are afraid of speaking English in front of others.

In my opinion, I think we should set up an English Corner to practice speaking Englsih. If so , we will be more and more confident of using English.

【解析】試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語set up建立； communicate with與某人交流； as a result 結果；are afraid of 害怕；in front of在。。前面； In my opinion在我看來； practice dong sth練習做某事。Secondly, students can not only get knowledge but also open their minds.在這個句子中not only ..but also 連接兩個并列的謂語動詞，時態保持一致。Thirdly , students will learn how to communicate with others.這句子中特殊疑問詞+不定式做動詞的賓語。However, 35%of the students don’t think so. Some of them are so busy with their homework that they have no time for it .這個句子中用到so…that ..如此以致于。

考點： 提綱類作文。