Question

1．你夢想中的學校是怎樣的？請發揮你充分的想象力，以My Dream School為題，分別從學校的大小、建筑、學科、作業、活動以及老師和學生等方面來描述一下你夢想中的學校．不少于70詞．
要求：
1．條理清晰，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規范；
2．提示內容全部體現在文章中；
3．不少于70詞．
My Dream School
                                                                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It will have a big library that has many kinds of books．
句中"that has many kinds of books"在句中做定語從句，修飾"library"．這句話意為：那里將會有一個有很多種類書的圖書館．
高分句型二：
I hope I can study in such a school．
句中"I can study in such a school．"在句中做賓語從句，這句話意為：我希望我能在這樣的學校學習．

解答 My dream school will be big and beautiful with lots of trees and flowers．We will have a great time in such a school．（開篇點題）
There will be some tall buildings and a great playground．It will have a big library that has many kinds of books．【高分句型一】We will be able to read and study in it．The teachers will be kind and friendly．They will play with us after class．There will be more activities for us to enjoy．We will have fewer subjects to learn and less homework to do．Everyone will have a computer in the classroom．We will do our homework on the Internet．（介紹未來的學校）
This is what my dream school will be like．I hope I can study in such a school．【高分句型二】（期待未來）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．