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5．游泳是許多人夏天喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)，但是學(xué)生溺水（drown）事故時(shí)有發(fā)生．在英語(yǔ)課堂上，老師要求學(xué)生們就"游泳安全的注意事項(xiàng)"展開(kāi)小組討論，并以"Swimming Safety"為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文匯報(bào)你們的討論結(jié)果．
提示：1．do warm-up exercise（熱身運(yùn)動(dòng)）
2．take a life ring （救生圈）
3．call for help
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要求：1．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范．
2．所有提示須用上，并提出不少于兩條的建議．
3.70詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Swimming is a favorite sport in summer，but many people have accidents when swimming，especially students．So it's very important for us to learn how to swim safely．In our group，we thinkwe must be careful and make sure to swim in a safe place first．Second，before we swim，we must do warm-up exercise．Third，we ought to take a life ring if we aren't able to swim well．Fourth，don't swim alone．Fifth，we should never get into water right after meals or when we're tired．Last but not least，if somebody is drowning，we had better call for help in time instead of saving him beyond our ability．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
So①it's very important for us to learn ②how to swim safely．
①It+be+adj+for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人是…的；it為形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)為動(dòng)詞不定式
②疑問(wèn)詞+不定式結(jié)構(gòu)作賓語(yǔ)
高分句型二：
①Last but not least，②if somebody is drowning，we ③had better call for help in time④instead of saving him ⑤beyond our ability．最后也是最重要的是，如果有人溺水，在超出我們的能力的情況下我們最好及時(shí)呼救．
①last but not least固定短語(yǔ)，最后也是最重要的是
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句
③had better do sth最好做某事
④instead of 代替，后可跟名詞代詞動(dòng)名詞．
⑤beyond one's  ability超出某人的能力

解答 Swimming Safety
Swimming is a favorite sport in summer，but many people have accidents when swimming，especially students．So it's very important for us to learn how to swim safely．【高分句型一】【游泳安全的重要性】In our group，we think we must be careful and make sure to swim in a safe place first．Second，before we swim，we must do warm-up exercise．Third，we ought to take a life ring if we aren't able to swim well．Fourth，don't swim alone．Fifth，we should never get into water right after meals or when we're tired．Last but not least，if somebody is drowning，we had better call for help in time instead of saving him beyond our ability．【高分句型二】【采取的措施】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實(shí)際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的 句子，劃分必要的段落．但要注意句式的靈活運(yùn)用，長(zhǎng)、短句，簡(jiǎn)單句，復(fù)合句要搭配運(yùn)用．