Question

7．假如你是Jane，大明是你的好朋友，他以前成績很好，自從家里有了電腦以后，大明總是以查資料為由，常常打游戲，導(dǎo)致成績直線下降，他爸爸很著急．昨天大明還和他爸爸發(fā)生了爭吵．你得知情況后也很著急，作為好朋友，請寫封信勸勸大明．要求80字左右．
你得知情況后很著急．
中學(xué)生該怎樣正確使用電腦．
學(xué)生該怎樣理解父母
提示詞：argue with sb．be worried  get information  understand each other  say sorry to sb．
Dear Daming，
I'm very glad to write to you．
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Yours，
Jane．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I'm sorry to hear that you have argued with your father yesterday．很遺憾聽說你昨天跟你爸爸吵架了．
be sorry to do sth聽到某事是很遺憾的/難過的；argued with sb和某人吵架．
【高分句型二】
You should make full use of time to study，instead of playing computers．你應(yīng)當(dāng)充分利用時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)，而不是玩電腦游戲．
should表示建議；make full use of time to do sth充分利用時(shí)間做某事；instead of sth/doing sth代替某事或做某事．

解答 Dear Daming：
I'm sorry to hear that you have argued with your father yesterday．（表明自己的態(tài)度）【高分句型一】I am very worried about you．（表明自己的擔(dān)心）We are friends，so I hope you can reduce the time of surfing the Internet and study hard．I also hope that you can use the Internet to get information．（提出希望）You should make full use of time to study，instead of playing computers．【高分句型二】Please do not quarrel with your father and say sorry to him．I believe that you can understand each other．If you follow my advice，I believe you can make it!（給出建議）
Yours
Jane

點(diǎn)評 能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)．