Question

書面表達(dá)（15分）

初中的三年即將過去，作為一名即將畢業(yè)的學(xué)生，你一定有很多的感想。請以I feel ______ in the three years.為題寫一篇短文，談一談你對這三年學(xué)習(xí)生涯的感想。

要求：1. 語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順；

2. 補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題（可以用happy, excited, sad, bored, appreciated…）

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

4. 80詞左右。短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

I feel happy in the three years.

Three years of time will pass in this school for me. I will graduate from this school.

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Answer 1

One possible version:

I feel happy in the three years.

Three years of time will pass in this school for me. I will graduate from this school. During the three years, I feel happy very much. Let me tell you the reasons:

First, thanks for my teachers. I’ve learnt a lot in the three years. The teachers told me how to learn, how to talk, how to think and how to do in my life.

Next, I’ve made many good friends in the three years. When I feel sad, angry or excited, they appear in my eyes and share it with me. Sometimes we help each other and also we do sports together. Spending time with them makes me very happy.

Finally, I help others a lot. I always help those students who are in trouble. When they got out of the trouble, they felt happy. And I felt happy, too.

In a word, I’m a happy student in the three years.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫對三年學(xué)習(xí)生涯的感想。應(yīng)該用第一人稱。寫作前先補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題，根據(jù)給出的提綱，寫出有關(guān)的短語和固定表達(dá)備用，最后串聯(lián)起來。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號運(yùn)用正確。在80詞左右的篇幅中，恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了一些短語和句式，如thanks for 、each other、In a word等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。