Question

10．假如你是湯姆，你剛收到好友彼得的一封信．請先讀完這封信，了解他的問題困惑，然后給他寫一封回信，告訴他問題所在并提出建議．要求：不少于60詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
提示詞：Why don't you…？You could/should…
Dear Tom，
I'm unhappy recently．I have too much pressure from school．I often have a headache and a cold．I think I'm too shy．I have few friends at school．I don't know what to do．Can you give me some advice？
Yours
PeterDear Peter，
I'm glad to  receive your letter．I think you should learn to relax．
Firstly，we should face the pressure properly，we can't be afraid of them and try our best todo with them．Secondly，make more friends，if you have problems you can talk with them，and during the talking，we may get some suggestions and solutions．Finally，trust ourselves．We should believe ourselves，we can deal with any trouble by ourselves．
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一   
we can't be afraid of them and try our best to do with them我們不能害怕他們，盡我們最大的努力去解決他們．try one's best to do sth．盡某人最大努力做某事．
高分句型二
if you have problems you can talk with them．如果你有問題可以和他們談?wù)劊�這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，如果…．

解答 Dear Peter，
I'm glad to  receive your letter．I think you should learn to relax．
Firstly，we should face the pressure properly，so we can't be afraid of them and try our best to do with them．【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】【要點(diǎn)一，正確面對壓力】Secondly，make more friends，if you have problems you can talk with them【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的使用】，and during the talking，we may get some suggestions and solutions【要點(diǎn)二，多交朋友】．Finally，trust ourselves．We should believe ourselves，we can deal with any trouble by ourselves．【要點(diǎn)三，自信】
Yours，
Tom．

點(diǎn)評 動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．