Question

（2009.福建卷）書面表達（滿分25分）

某英語報社擬成立“微笑俱樂部”，現向癸未征募會員。要求申請者提交一篇題為“I want to Smile”的英語短文。請你以申請者的身份，根據以下思路圖的提示用英語寫一篇短文。

注意：

1.       根據思路圖適當展開，以使行文連貫；

2.       詞數：120左右

I Want to Smile

                                                                                

                                                                             

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One Possible Version

There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible,

First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.  

In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.  

【解析】本文為圖畫式作文，做題的關鍵是---審題，考生要把握如下幾點：

1.     文體：說明文。

2.     主體時態：一般現在時。

3.     主體人稱：第一人稱。

4.     內容要點：①微笑的優點；②想對其微笑的人物（父母）；③對父母微笑的理由；④對自己微笑的理由；⑤總結。