Question

【題目】書面表達（共計20分）

假如你叫瑪麗，你校正在開展一項專題討論：九年級學生要不要加強體育鍛煉？根據以下信息給報社寫封信，介紹討論情況并說出自己的觀點。

65%的學生認為	35%的學生認為
1. 應該每天進行體育鍛煉。	1. 鍛煉浪費時間，使人疲勞。
2. 可以做早操，打乒乓球，但時間不要太長。	2. 運動后很興奮，不能很快投入學習。
3. 鍛煉有助于健康，減少疾病。	3. 運動中可能會受傷。
4. 運動是大腦休息，學習效果更好。	……

要求： 1. 開頭已給出（不計入總詞數）；

2. 參考詞匯：effective (有效的），reduce 減少，brain大腦。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether students should take physical exercise. _

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Yours,

Mary

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether students should take physical exercise. 65% of the students think they should take exercise every day, such as doing morning exercises, playing ping-pong and basketball, but it shouldn’t take up too much time. Proper exercise can keep healthy and reduce diseases. What’s more, sports let their brains have a rest so that they can study effectively.

On the other hand, 35% believe taking exercise is a waste of time and it is tiring. After having sports, they are much too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. It’s also possible to get hurt in sports.

Yours,

Mary

【解析】

【名師點評】這是一篇比較優秀的作文。首先這篇作文的結構完整，層次分明。這篇作文共有兩段。第一段是承接題目中所給出的開頭，點明主題之后，敘述了支持學生應該參加體育鍛煉的學生們的觀點。要點完整，表達準確。第二段是另外一部分同學的觀點，他們覺得學生們不應該參加體育鍛煉。其次這篇作文較好的注意了語句之間的鏈接，力求使文章表達流暢。文章句型的使用如65% of the students think... such as...，What’s more, sports let their brains have a rest so that they can study effectively.，After having sports,，It’s also possible get hurt in sports等。