Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

假如你叫李華，初中生活即將結(jié)束，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖為你的好朋友寫一段畢業(yè)留言。 內(nèi)容包括：他/她給你留下的深刻印象、你們?cè)谝黄鸬目鞓窌r(shí)光以及對(duì)他/她最美好的祝愿。

要求：1. 提示詞語(yǔ)僅供參考，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；

2. 90詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Our middle school life will soon come to an end. But I'll never forget you，Wang Ziyuan. You're my best friend. You're tall. You're so smart and so outgoing that everyone wants to be friends with you. I'll never forget the smile on your face. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. We used to play basketball on the playground and had a good time. At this very moment，I'm saying goodbye to you and giving all my best wishes to you. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever. I wish you great success in the future.

【解析】

這是一篇以校園生活為話題的習(xí)作。根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖為好朋友寫一段畢業(yè)留言。寫作前可以列出一個(gè)提綱，主要從三個(gè)方面去表達(dá)：朋友留下的深刻印象、一起的快樂時(shí)光以及對(duì)對(duì)朋友最美好的祝愿。初中生活即將結(jié)束會(huì)用到一般將來時(shí)，描寫留下的印象用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，過去的經(jīng)歷用一般過去時(shí)來表達(dá)，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。