Question

【題目】書面表達(15分)

你每天的家庭作業都是什么時間完成的？需要父母的幫忙嗎？請你結合上面文章的內容，寫一篇短文。內容包括：

1. 每天大概花多少時間做作業？

2. 能不能自覺獨立地完成自己的作業？

3. 你怎樣看待家庭作業？

要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名。

2. 語句連貫，詞數在80個左右。作文的開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。

I often spend nearly two hours to do my homework every day. ______________________________________

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If so, we will feel tired and don’t want to do it carefully.

Answer 1

【答案】

I often spend nearly two hours doing my homework every day. To be honest, I really don’t like to do so much homework, but I have to. I know it is good for my study. I can do my homework by myself and often do it carefully, but I don’t do it as soon as I get home. Sometimes I watched TV for too long and didn’t finish my homework on time. Then I had to do it till deep night. I think doing homework is necessary, but it can’t take us too long time.

If so, we will feel tired and don’t want to do it carefully.

【名師點評】

這是一篇提綱作文，所給提綱要點清晰，要求明確，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真審題，勾勒要點，并適當發揮。行文中要注意人稱、時態的變化及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】

這篇短文能夠根據寫作提示，較好地把閱讀文章中與寫作相關的內容進行歸納，內容覆蓋所有要點，語言表達準確，考生有較大的發揮空間；同時靈活使用復雜句式，使文章自然流暢。文章中還使用了一些的常用的句式和短語，如：spend...doing sth, to be honest, be good for, as soon as, on time等，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意總結，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

【解析】略