Question

【題目】書面表達

根據圖片內容寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi, I am Jim. I am a boy. I am a student in Hong Xing Middle School. On school days, I usually get up at six o’clock in the morning. Then I take a shower. At seven, I have a glass of milk and some bread for my breakfast. I go to school at about ten past seven. Classes begin at eight o’clock. I have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I have two classes. At half past four in the afternoon, it’s time for me to play football with my classmates. We are all tired but happy. Then I go home and do my homework at six in the evening. I usually go to bed at nine. This is my school day. What about you, please tell me.

【解析】

本文屬于圖畫作文，描述吉姆一天的生活。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如usually, get up, in the morning, take a shower, a glass of, at+時間點, it’s time for sb to do以及what about。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。