Question

【題目】假設你叫李明，你們班級要選拔新班長，你想向班主任王老師推薦張航。請根據表格內容，寫一封80詞左右的推薦信給王老師。信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

姓名	張航
特長	精通電腦，擅長演講
性格、品質	自信、勤奮、謙虛、有條理、樂于助人
個人事跡	經常花很多時間組織課外活動，從不介意為班級做額外的工作，總是盡最大努力幫助同學，深受同學們歡迎。

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Answer 1

【答案】I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Zhang Hang is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers. He is hard-working, modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school acivities.

He is very helpful, too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.

I think Zhang Hang is the most suitable person to be our monitor.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，向老師推薦張航做我們的班長。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be good at, do well in, spend+時間+doing, too, mind doing, try one’s best to do, be popular with等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。